Our First Time

Erin Danhi

29 March 2011

Our First Time

Our resistance lies somewhere

In the pile of movie night pajamas.

Pre-penetration, we are naked,

Tangled flesh pretzels.



Fumbling, I place you just inside.

You push in then we lie unmoving.

A solved equation, a finished puzzle.

We exchange the same breath of air.



In ten electrified, pressurized thrusts

It is over, no apology necessary baby.

Our hearts pound so loudly we mistake it

For your parents storming downstairs.



In the backyard, we puff our camels silently.

Eyes closed, our smokeless hands find each other.

I’m ready to sleep in this cold metal chair.

You’re practically ready to marry me.

First Draft

Our resistance lies somewhere

In the pile of movie night pajamas.

Still separate, we are perfectly naked.

Twisted pretzels of warm flesh on the couch.



I take you in my hand and place you just inside of me.

You slowly push in and we lie unmoving.

The easiest puzzle ever now solved.

We breathe each other’s air.



We took the express line, ten thrusts or less.

We giggled and marinated in our sweat.

Our hearts beat so loud that we mistook it for your

Parents storming down the stairs.



In your backyard, you lit us two Camels.

I took mine from you with an obvious shaky hand.

You looked at me with a serenity I’d only just learned.

We sat back and closed our eyes.

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